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how is this long poem talking about the diff stages of life i wrote it give me a feedback upon reading it ,fast





The Truth About Life





A bundle of innocence,


Oblivious about the pricky thorns .


A piece of heavenly caution ,


Unfazed by the imperfection .


A bird flying in the air of red love ,


Unaffected by the importance of time .


Is a baby’s life .





A symbol of boisterous nature ,


Keeping the internal pragmatism closed eye .


A laugh of innocence at other creature ,


Feeling nothing for another’s feel .


A flow of questions as a preacher ,


Dealing with nothing answerable .


Is a child’s life .





A glint of fear for tomorrow ,


Dwindling to find the future .


A search for importance with a sorrow ,


Jumping to unseen conclusions .


A work for tomorrow without any borrow ,


Trying ways to stop time .


Is an adolescent’s life .





A hunt for a position ,


Vibrating for one to another to find stability .


A power to face rejection ,


Holding on to the mist of god .


A want to be god’s best creation ,


Improving imperfections all time .


Is a young adult’s life .





A stamina for working sun to moon ,


Preaching suggestions every time .


A jaded soul longing for a free afternoon ,


Speaking unplausible false truth .


A wait by his family in a room ,


Waiting for their sun to arrive .


Is an adult’s life .





A touch of the lazy comforts ,


Growing high love for family .


A respect in the eyes of others ,


Covering the body with a smooth armour .


A leaning towards god at the edge ,


Finding unmeaning in meaningful things .


Is an elder’s life .

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My brother in law write poetry and has had about 7 books published and he's no p00f. Your poem seems to be about life and beliefs, growing up as a child and heading into adulthood and maturity. I enjoyed reading it!
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